The colour scheme on the front cover matches the contents page which is more professional, there is good image quality in the front cover and the contents page, and the contents page is visually busy. However the font is not consistent between the front cover and the contents page and the cover lines for the front cover could be spaced out. Overall, it's a very good magazine.
the colour scheme for your contents page clashes too much as there is a lot of red. not many cover lines make the cover page look empty. however, the quality of the picture is good. the contents page looks better and it's consistent as its still following the same colour scheme.
You can clearly see the lines where you photoshopped him in. You did well in removing bits of the masthead to make it look like he is in front of it. Good attempt. There is only 1 colour on the cover page, you could've added 2 more colours to create a house style. You could have also created a skyline and a few cover lines apart from just 1. The font is okay for the cover page but the font for the contents page is a bit fancy. You could have added more original photographs on your contents page and you should have added some more colours instead of just red. Overall, both of the pages are all right and getting there.
The colour for the background of your magazine front cover clashes with the cover stars jumper. The photography is effective due to the use of direct mode of address. There could have been more conventions of a magazine front cover like more cover stories and your manipulation of the masthead could be improved. The colour scheme is consistent however the fonts you have used is not consistent and can be a bit hard to read.
I like how you added a glow to your texts because it makes them stand out. I also like how the '99%pass rate ' is big because it catches attention . Improvements: You needed to remove the background on your models head because you can still see the background especially around the head. Also you should have added more cover lines and also a puff/flash.
The colour scheme on the front cover matches the contents page which is more professional, there is good image quality in the front cover and the contents page, and the contents page is visually busy. However the font is not consistent between the front cover and the contents page and the cover lines for the front cover could be spaced out. Overall, it's a very good magazine.
ReplyDeletethe colour scheme for your contents page clashes too much as there is a lot of red. not many cover lines make the cover page look empty. however, the quality of the picture is good. the contents page looks better and it's consistent as its still following the same colour scheme.
ReplyDeleteYou can clearly see the lines where you photoshopped him in. You did well in removing bits of the masthead to make it look like he is in front of it. Good attempt. There is only 1 colour on the cover page, you could've added 2 more colours to create a house style. You could have also created a skyline and a few cover lines apart from just 1. The font is okay for the cover page but the font for the contents page is a bit fancy. You could have added more original photographs on your contents page and you should have added some more colours instead of just red. Overall, both of the pages are all right and getting there.
ReplyDeleteThe colour for the background of your magazine front cover clashes with the cover stars jumper. The photography is effective due to the use of direct mode of address. There could have been more conventions of a magazine front cover like more cover stories and your manipulation of the masthead could be improved. The colour scheme is consistent however the fonts you have used is not consistent and can be a bit hard to read.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a glow to your texts because it makes them stand out. I also like how the '99%pass rate ' is big because it catches attention .
ReplyDeleteImprovements: You needed to remove the background on your models head because you can still see the background especially around the head. Also you should have added more cover lines and also a puff/flash.
Your front cover is good but contains a limited amount of cover lines. Your contents page is very good.
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