Cover Page - The colour scheme is alright but I don't like the way "The Resurrection!" is placed, I think it should be straight. The puff is a bit tacky. I Like how there is a quote but I think the font should be bolder and you should change the font. You should add the price of your magazine on it. Your masthead is unique and bright.
Contents page - The colour scheme works but I think the blue should be darker and you should change the font. The red for the pages is a bit too bright but overall it looks alright.
DPS - The colour scheme works with your previous pages but you should have added more questions. Change the font cos it looks too playful and swirly. You should rub out the white that's on top of the guys head so it doesn't look baitly photoshopped. You should lay it out better.
I like the simplicity of your front cover it really catches the attention of the reader. I also like the colour and the layout of the contents page it looks clean and tidy. I feel like the image on youR DPS let you down as it isn't very big other than that I like your magazine.
In my opinion I think the font and the way the main cover line is placed isnt very professional. However I really like your contents page, the colour colour scheme is verycool.
the main coverline on your cover is slanted which makes it look less appealing, not enough coverlines and it just looks out of place and the colour scheme doesnt really work for me. vibrant red doesnt go well with purple. your contents page looks out off place and doesnt look professional or like a contents page also your DPS doesnt look like a Q&A. look at an existing dps and try to make it look similar to that
Cover Page - The colour scheme is alright but I don't like the way "The Resurrection!" is placed, I think it should be straight. The puff is a bit tacky. I Like how there is a quote but I think the font should be bolder and you should change the font. You should add the price of your magazine on it. Your masthead is unique and bright.
ReplyDeleteContents page - The colour scheme works but I think the blue should be darker and you should change the font. The red for the pages is a bit too bright but overall it looks alright.
DPS - The colour scheme works with your previous pages but you should have added more questions. Change the font cos it looks too playful and swirly. You should rub out the white that's on top of the guys head so it doesn't look baitly photoshopped. You should lay it out better.
I like the simplicity of your front cover it really catches the attention of the reader.
ReplyDeleteI also like the colour and the layout of the contents page it looks clean and tidy. I feel like the image on youR DPS let you down as it isn't very big other than that I like your magazine.
In my opinion I think the font and the way the main cover line is placed isnt very professional. However I really like your contents page, the colour colour scheme is verycool.
ReplyDeletethe main coverline on your cover is slanted which makes it look less appealing, not enough coverlines and it just looks out of place and the colour scheme doesnt really work for me. vibrant red doesnt go well with purple. your contents page looks out off place and doesnt look professional or like a contents page also your DPS doesnt look like a Q&A. look at an existing dps and try to make it look similar to that
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